Good grade

This i written for my writing class and it was graded out of an 18 and i got 20.5 i guess it was so good :) hahaha i was happy i'm trying to do better in school and all but yea anyways this is what i wrote it sounds pretty good!!!


KOLIGANEK HUSKIES V.S. ST.MICHAEL STORM IN BASKETBALL

BUZZZZZZZZ!!!!!! It is end of third quarter one more to go, I say to myself while running to the bench where my other teammates are waiting. “Ok we need to work as a team” My coach Sheena has said for like the eleventh time she continues saying but I can barely hear her with all this yelling and cheering going on in the gym. I wipe my sweat off my forehead inhaling deeply with aloud sigh coming out of exhaustion I’m still breathing heavily. I look up to the scoreboard we are behind by six. “Christine!!! You heard me?? You have to stay in your position don’t move she will just get past you” I quickly look at Sheena nodding my head, I look at the crowd behind me I see my mom sitting with my siblings I can tell by her lips she’s saying “John take Ashton to the bathroom” I quickly look back to my team we are about to put our hands together I slowly reach my hand in “Ok this is it!!” Sheena say’s Huskies on three one..two..three “HUSKIES!!!” after saying this Koliganek crowd cheer’s saying “Go Huskies!!” BUZZZZ!!!! Ok this is it the last quarter I walk onto the court St.Michael Storm is taking the ball out. I’m running down the court we set up at the end I’ve got my arms out ready to guard I’m looking at the ball bouncing as I see it look’s like Tammi is going to pass it to Cecelia I ran pass them before the ball gets to Cecelia I’m in between them I jump up now I have the ball in my hands s my feet touch the floor I dribble down the court yelling “SET IT UP!!” we keep passing it then the ball comes back to me I shoot the ball from three’s I make it. We still have three minutes left now in the game we are down by three. I race back to the other end of the court Tammi is about to shoot I take the ball back I look at the time we have 59 seconds I shoot a three make I waste no time I run to the other end by time now I look up we have 45 seconds I go towards Tammi she has the ball I take it dribbling down the court I stopped and looked up we have 30 seconds I shoot a two make it we are now up by two with 10 seconds on the clock Cecelia takes the ball out I grab it pass it to Katie she passes it back I shoot from the three I look up the clock says two seconds I follow my shot running everything feels so slow the crowd quiet but at the same time they are loud I look the ball goes in BUUZZZZZZ!!!!! The whole gym is screaming and whistling we did it I walk to the Storms team to shake hands I reach “ Good game” I say to all of them shaking the team’s hands at the same time. I look up I see my coach proudly smiling at me nodding her head approvingly I smile back wiping the sweat off sighing in the good but tired way.
written by Christine Ishnook